I really like the idea of trying to show someone being of mixed ethnicity in this way, by comparing the two stereotyped looks (the description said the subject was half Indonesian, half Australian). I also really love the amount of detail that went into making this look like a comic cover, like the CCA stamp, volume number, and also the shading on the skin. One thing I would change is the lettering of the title 'Peleburan' so it's not over the face (but maybe behind it), and also clearer borders around the feature panels. I loved this one because of the clear shapes and minimal colors. It's a simple design but it's effective for what it's made for (wrapping paper). It's extremely aesthetically pleasing, personally because of the spacing/placing of the patterns and color choice. I also really liked the clear lines on the jaguar/leopard vs the lineless style of the print with fish. There's a good variety but all the paper looks like it belongs...